Recently, a proposal has been made by the Minister of education that the school's coming years will not begin at the beginning of September as usual, but in the middle of August. Moreover, there will be a two-week break between the semesters. I strongly disagree with the Minister's new proposal and I beleive that it will be a big mistake to insert this law to the system.
Personally, I think that the summer break between the school years is significantly important for the students, after their serious efforts during the year. Many students say that this break is the ideal opportunity for them (to) "lie down"(ww.) for a second(ww.-while) and carefully prepare for the next year.
Furthermore, There are(gr.) definitely no more appropiate time for the students to work and earn some money. It is widely known that the teenagers today are more likely to go out in weekends with freinds. Therefore, as a result of avoiding bothering the parents, the summer break gives them plenty (of) time to take care of their savings for the following year.
It is clear that this new proposal has no place in the education system. Besides, the Minister of Education has to deal with a lot of unsolved problems which require a(מיותר) more attention than the break(like what?).
Personally, I think that the summer break between the school years is significantly important for the students, after their serious efforts during the year. Many students say that this break is the ideal opportunity for them (to) "lie down"(ww.) for a second(ww.-while) and carefully prepare for the next year.
Furthermore, There are(gr.) definitely no more appropiate time for the students to work and earn some money. It is widely known that the teenagers today are more likely to go out in weekends with freinds. Therefore, as a result of avoiding bothering the parents, the summer break gives them plenty (of) time to take care of their savings for the following year.
It is clear that this new proposal has no place in the education system. Besides, the Minister of Education has to deal with a lot of unsolved problems which require a(מיותר) more attention than the break(like what?).
Good work!
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Daphna
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