An organization of accident victims believes that young drivers are involved in a lot of accidents due to their age and has recently proposed that the age for getting a driver's license should be raised to 19. Perhaps there is a reasonable explanation behind such claims, but I am convinced that this is not the proper solution. - very good opening!
First, around the age of 17, most teenagers have much more free time than later, as a result of the army. As we all know, at the age of 18, the teenagers should join the army
and serve there for 2-3 years on average. During this period of time it would be very exhausting to get the driver's license. Moreover, it is known that teenagers tend to go out and spend time with their friends, therefore, it would be nicer if the child is independent and does not bother his parents frequently about the ride.
In addition, by using caution and concentration while driving, the way of thinking develops(phr.) and improves, which is very important and vital for the teenager's future.
I believe that the best way to deter the young drivers is by exposing them visually to the outcomes of some fatal accidents and make them reconsider their way of driving.
I am quite sure that the ideal age to get a driver's license is 17 and there is no need to limit the driver's license age to 19. I hope that my solution will reduce the car accidents among the teenagers and the teenagers themselves will gain the respect and the esteem about driving from the adults.
First, around the age of 17, most teenagers have much more free time than later, as a result of the army. As we all know, at the age of 18, the teenagers should join the army
and serve there for 2-3 years on average. During this period of time it would be very exhausting to get the driver's license. Moreover, it is known that teenagers tend to go out and spend time with their friends, therefore, it would be nicer if the child is independent and does not bother his parents frequently about the ride.
In addition, by using caution and concentration while driving, the way of thinking develops(phr.) and improves, which is very important and vital for the teenager's future.
I believe that the best way to deter the young drivers is by exposing them visually to the outcomes of some fatal accidents and make them reconsider their way of driving.
I am quite sure that the ideal age to get a driver's license is 17 and there is no need to limit the driver's license age to 19. I hope that my solution will reduce the car accidents among the teenagers and the teenagers themselves will gain the respect and the esteem about driving from the adults.
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Daphna
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