Help to Sammy

31st December, 2009

Dear Sammy,

I understand that you need to drive from place to place and I know how you feel, but you have no driver's license and if I were you, I would not drive with my crazy friend, because it is very dangerous and that can end badly.

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I can only advice you that you should go to your friend and explain to him that if he does not stop driving at high speeds, you will not drive with him again until he deos not stop driving fast.

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Also, tell him that many people die on the roads due to fast driving. You can also tell him that he could also risk his life because of his fast driving. Or better, give up driving with him, and use the taxi and the busses. Do not worry, this will not continue forever, wait until you receive your driver's license, then you will drive with your car wherever you want to go, whenever.

I hope you will use my advice, and I hope you will succeed overcoming the peer pressure that even though hi is your friends, you must tell him no. Do not forget to write back when you solve the problem.

(Yours,

Avi)

Much-much better. Good work.

(90)

Daphna

Cellphone That Forbidden at Schools.

Our pricipal, Gilat Simon, decided a month ago to forbid the cellphones in Kugel. She decided that students would not be allowed to bring the cell phones to school. She claims that the students bring their cell phones with them to class, and sometimes use them during a lesson to play games, send messages and listen to music. I am against that decision for several reasons.

In case of emergency, I think that if my family, my friends or anyone I know, wants to tell me something important, like an emergency situation ,I'll have to carry the cell-phone with me all the time to be updated. Also, when I have something important to tell my parents or someone else, I need the phone next to me.

Another reason is the communication between people. People who are in different countries or different areas, who want to communicate with each other about something important. For example, if you travel to a faraway or a new place with your class, and you want to update your family about your experiences, you need your cellphone with you.

Finally, I think that the cell-phone is a wonderful and useful invention that we must carry everywhere, including to school because we never know when it can help us.

Better.

(85)

Daphna

Informal Letter To A Friend

-----------------------------------------------------------------November 12nd, 2009

Dear Felix,

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Hey, how are you? I just wanted to share some experiences with you. It has been a long time since we have spoken, because of my tests and my homework. I am sorry but I will try to make it up to you. I was hoping I could talk to you about my problem.Well, I have a problem concentrating during the lessons since I don't go to bed before 11pm.

since I am used to going to sleep at 11pm or 12pm, I can't concentrate in class. It makes me crazy

I forgot to say when it all began. Well, my cousin registered at a new school.

This school is very close to our home, but my cousin lives in the southern Isreal, therefore he can't move from one place to the another. Consequently, he moved here to finish his studies.

Now, my cousin's habits are a little different from my habits. My cousin is used to going to sleep between 11pm and 1am. I can't sleep until all of the people in the house go to sleep. Thus, he makes me stay awake late. That's why I can't concentrate in class.

If this happened to you, I would be happy to get any advice on how to deal with this situation.

Take Care. I hope to hear from you soon.

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Avi.

Good.

(87)

Daphna

Inventions

In this essay I am going to tell about an invention that I think is really

important - the Internet. It is a huge source for music, games, chatting and more. I think it is important because it makes things easier, you can gain alot of information through it and connect with people around the world.

For me, it is currently the world's largest information source . It provides us almost with all the of the information we look for, and it can help us with homework and such. We can also check the current weather, to decide what to wear tomorrow. There are virtual shops, where we can buy things on the internet if they are not available in stores in our area. There are also news, we can be aware to what happens in the world at the moment instead of watching TV.

There are lots of times when we are stuck at home, without our cellphone but we arranged a date with someone. With the Internet, we can just send an Email to the date and say we can't come from several reasons. It is very useful and easy to use.

In conclusion, I think that the Internet is the most powerful invention today,

it is very easy to use and accessible to all ages. It would be hard to gain information without it, and hard to connect with others, hear free music and more.

(70)

Daphna

My Final Fix 20/11/2009

My name is Avi. My name was chosen by my mother.

She wanted to name me after her father . The name Avi in Hebrew is a short name for "aba sheli" which means my father in English.

In the Normology websites they are written that I am responsible and diligent.
I agree with them and I think it is right. Since in real life I do clean my stuff and study hard for exams. In addition, they write that I have strong willpower and they are right again, because if I really want something I get it.

Avi ha a couple of meanings. The first one, is a known figure from the bible called Avraam. Avraam is really important figure that everycody knowns. The second one, which is the reason Avi was chosen, is that Avi is a shortcut for "Aba Sheli") ("My father" in Hebrew") My dad felt proud when naming me Avi because he felt like he is the reason my name exists.

In conclusion , I like my name because it's easy to remember and it sounds good and suits my nature.

I think that the information from the Internet is really true and fits to my personality.

My Fix Letter

Date 06\09\2009

Dear Avi Mordehayev.

My name is Avi Mordehayev.I like to watch T.V and spend my time on the computer. I like to play football, and play with my brothers. My sister Gila is learning for the psihometry exam and all my family are hoping that she will pass the exam.

I feel very good with the beginning of the year. Now, I am at the "Techem" class, that means I study computers. I study for 4 point bagrut in math and I hope that I pass the 5 points bargot, and I will not give up until I pass the exam successfully. In English I study for 5 point.

Finally, I hope that I will improve my knowledge in math and English and I will success with the final exams.

.See you at the end of the year

Avi.