-------------------------------17 Vintage St.
-------------------------------Israel
-------------------------------February 7, 2011
Ms. Gilat Simon
Principal
Kugel High School
Holon
Mote Gur 18 St. (these two have to change places - first the street and then the city)
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Dear Ms. Simon,
-------------------------------Israel
-------------------------------February 7, 2011
Ms. Gilat Simon
Principal
Kugel High School
Holon
Mote Gur 18 St. (these two have to change places - first the street and then the city)
.
Dear Ms. Simon,
.
Concerning the decision to cancel all our school trips, I would like to express my opinion on that important decision. Following the alcohol (drinking) and smoking in our school, I strongly agree with you and think that this is the right way to improve the behavior.
For a start, the last long journey we have made(ww.+gr. - use the past) was greatly shameful. We have(מיותר) left behind mess and chaos in place of the tidy rooms and the neat corridors that we got on the first day. These events have probably left a bad impression on the hostel owner.
As for the teachers and the hostel workers, I believe the the students' behavior should not be their bother(ww.) and mature students have to be aware of those around them and respect them.
I congratulate you on your decision. I only wish it will influence them for the better so that you can take them to the outside world(phr.).
Yours truly,
James Lork
Concerning the decision to cancel all our school trips, I would like to express my opinion on that important decision. Following the alcohol (drinking) and smoking in our school, I strongly agree with you and think that this is the right way to improve the behavior.
For a start, the last long journey we have made(ww.+gr. - use the past) was greatly shameful. We have(מיותר) left behind mess and chaos in place of the tidy rooms and the neat corridors that we got on the first day. These events have probably left a bad impression on the hostel owner.
As for the teachers and the hostel workers, I believe the the students' behavior should not be their bother(ww.) and mature students have to be aware of those around them and respect them.
I congratulate you on your decision. I only wish it will influence them for the better so that you can take them to the outside world(phr.).
Yours truly,
James Lork
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